Pretty awesome!
I really like how you portrayed the dream. How people's bodies and faces were shifting in and out and there were mobs of people that were without identification except for when they would briefly be a defined person then snap back to being a shadow figure. Plus the strange music and undefined beginning and ending of the dream. Quite accurate and fun to watch.
The rest was funny, too. I've had to do this in real life several times so I can relate.